Friday, 28 February 2014

Adjustments made to assignment 2 based on tutor feedback

The following adjustments were made to assignment 2, based on the feedback received from my tutor.

Assignment 2
 Curve
Original photograph
My tutor pointed out the lines on this photograph were mainly diagonal and so i replaced it with the photograph below. I wanted to use the photograph below originally, but worried it was too basic and so didn't but after talking with my tutor, i decided it was the correct photograph after all and that i should perhaps trust my instinct more often.
Photograph in Assignment 2 that was used as a replacement for the above.
Diagonal

Original Photograph
My tutor pointed out to me, that although the veins in the leaf were diagonal, this was more of a single point photograph.

Photograph featured in assignment 2 that replaced the photograph above.

Rhythm
Original photograph
My tutor suggested the rhythm in this photograph was not strong enough

Photograph used in assignment 2 to replace the above, which a much stronger rhythm.

Exercise : curves

Original photograph

Photograph used in exercise to replace the above

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