The following adjustments were made to assignment 2, based on the feedback received from my tutor.
Assignment 2
Curve
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Original photograph My tutor pointed out the lines on this photograph were mainly diagonal and so i replaced it with the photograph below. I wanted to use the photograph below originally, but worried it was too basic and so didn't but after talking with my tutor, i decided it was the correct photograph after all and that i should perhaps trust my instinct more often. |
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Photograph in Assignment 2 that was used as a replacement for the above. |
Diagonal
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Original Photograph My tutor pointed out to me, that although the veins in the leaf were diagonal, this was more of a single point photograph. |
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Photograph featured in assignment 2 that replaced the photograph above. |
Rhythm
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Original photograph My tutor suggested the rhythm in this photograph was not strong enough |
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Photograph used in assignment 2 to replace the above, which a much stronger rhythm. |
Exercise : curves
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Original photograph |
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Photograph used in exercise to replace the above |
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